[ Personal Critique Thread ]

Am I doing it wrong? Did I suspend reality (and characterization) a little too much, even for Poly?

I'm not the perfect roleplayer, and I've never claimed to be, but I would like to do the best that I can so that everyone can have the best experience possible.

In light of that, a critique thread! Feel free to use it. Comments are screened, so really, say what you want, however you want, and so forth.

Wuv. ♥

Cake, mm? A rather innocent curse. But now that people are done obsessing over meat cakes and football cakes (and I'm sure no one will want to touch a cake again for quite a while), this might be as appropriate of a time as any to offer...




【 the smart choice。】

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Thank you very much for your time, and may we all be friends on the field soon!

Admittedly, I've only been here for two days. But the lot of you? Would put even the craziest soap opera to shame. Seriously, all of you make Koutarou seem normal, and that's hard to do.

And I'm not sure if I mean that as a compliment. Actually, I don't think I do.


[ooc; New baby still doesn't get it. And she's cursed-- lacks tact, today. Which can be good or bad, depending on who you are. >_>]

Ah.

I don't think I've ever sleepwalked before.

...and certainly not into an unfamiliar area.


[ooc; Wandered into the City. Quietly observing everything and taking notes occasionally.]